The only critique I had on my elevator pitch was more of a suggestion, and that was instead of making my app about finding other golfers to play with, it has now been updated to include many popular sports. It was also suggested I explain more about how the app works, so I attempted to do that as well.
Sunday, July 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
The only critique I had on my elevator pitch was more of a suggestion, and that was instead of making my app about finding other golfers to play with, it has now been updated to include many popular sports. It was also suggested I explain more about how the app works, so I attempted to do that as well.
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It is a great idea to incorporate other sports. Perhaps colleges and universities could be a great strategic partner for you, they can promote your app for their students to play together and organize casual sports on campus. Also large businesses could use this app to help their employees put things together. Country clubs, golf clubs, tennis courts, or anywhere else they have the facilities to play sports could also promote this app to bring people together to use their product, driving business for themselves at the same time.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in actually presenting this idea! It also sounds like a great idea, and I would most likely use it because I’m always looking for people to play new sports with me. I think one way to improve the idea would be to start in an unfortunate scenario where you can’t find friends to play with, then tie it into the idea.
ReplyDeleteI thought about adding in an introductory scenario where I paint a picture of wanting to play a game of whatever, but having no one to play with. It's just hard to fit everything into just 60 seconds lol thanks for the advise.
DeleteGood job with your third version of the pitch. I like that you were able to successfully implement the feedback you got into the pitch, as I think they were good suggestions and ultimately make the product more appealing. I also think that you explained the functionality of the app nicely, and it made it easy to understand what your idea was.
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